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[She won’t let me sleep…. HEELP]

aawww I love the cat! haha

Creeperforce24 responds:

As a creeper, I do not :(
(get it? XD)

[Lara Croft Animated - Sketch to Final]

its so mechanical I was waiting for steam to shoot out of her head like a train,

it's too fast, too much unnecessary movement, all on a lifeless character, shes hitting ROCK with a climbing pick, wheres the HIT?, and the effort of climbing, you gotta feel the character too. not just trace over mathematically tweened shapes.

so far everything I've seen you do is too much action in a short amount of time. you cant get a read on most of it, all you can pick up is that its a wondering blob of lines.

the only problem is that blobs have 3 dimensions.

WaldFlieger responds:

No tweening involved, all done by hand, with the exception of the object movement I used as reference. See above for more detailed response. Thanks for the comments.

[Darth Vader Idle Animation]

Alright, I like it, But it felt off when I was looking at Darth. I figured out that you have a lot going on, things are moving at different speeds, which is great, but its too much action in too little time (its hard to read the animation comfortably and I almost missed the great subtle animation of his head), but if you wanted him to move that fast I think you should fix his silhouette, his arms are too close together with almost no movement of his shoulders.(which would help with the factor that he has a cape)..anyways its definitely fun to look at, that's just my advice. great job!

[Adventure Time 8bit Mockup]

awesome! i had this same idea like 4 years ago